Key excerpt from this version:
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Optional contrast:
[Short remark or 1–2 lines from an earlier source to show the difference.]
[Describe specific word/phrase choices here – what stands out, what kind of tone it creates, what Hermetic principle it leans into (correspondence, mentalism, etc.).]
[Spell out how this wording changes the metaphysics: what kind of cosmos it imagines, what emotional & ideological flavor it adds, and what becomes thinkable or unthinkable.]
[Short paragraph connecting these details to why the text looks the way it does.]
[Who was allowed to read this? Who was it designed to impress, reassure, or control? Note any censorship, doctrinal pressures, or cultural anxieties baked into the phrasing.]
[Explain how this version shaped later Hermeticism, alchemy, occultism, or pop-spirituality. Which groups picked it up, and what did they use it to justify or explore?]
[2–4 sentences explicitly tying this version back into big thesis: how it redistributes authority over Hermetic knowledge, who gains control, who gets locked out.]